The Most Important Person in My Life

Outline

Introduction:
_ Topic sentence: My mother is the greatest present God gives me in my life
_ Controlling ideas:
+ She always does anything she can for me
+ She gives me some wonderful advices, and teach me a lot about life
_ Thesis statement: But now, I realize that she is a part of my life sinnce I was born

Body paragraph:

Paragraph 1:
_ Signal phrase: My father had died before I was born
_ Topic sentence: So, my mother had to do many things for me to make me more confident
_ Supporting ideas:
+ She tells me many funny stories to make me laugh when I fell sad
+ She buys for me a lot of presents, new clothes when getting salary

Paragraph 2:
_ Signal phrase: It does not mean that she always accept to me about all of things what I want
_ Topic sentence:She always stands by my side to give me some wonderful advices when I encounter problem , teach me the way to live without depending on the orther.